I am not into the explicit type poems but it was good for this type of write. And it wasn't vulgar or raunchy so that's a plus!

Wow, you are amazing, your words take me to a different world of hinking, great job.

Well done, explicit poetry is something i am not very fond of, but i liked this poem, flowed well, and rhyme was okay.
You didn't overdo it on the raunchiness and that made it all the more worthwhile to read.
Keep writing
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I usually dont like explicit poems because they're mainly about something bad happening to the person but i really liked this one. A lot. Great job and excellent write!

Holy Shit.... GREAT POEM babe... Wow It totally took a turn at the end.. I thought you were actually describing somethin that you had already experienced... and then you flipped the script.. hehe good good good... nothing more need. Keep on writin.. and please vote or comment my work... I'm new on the site. See ya
-April

Um.. honestly this poem is writen really well.. and it has great flow.. but i just cant say i love it.. because i am really opposed to pre-marital sex.. i know in the poem it doesnt actually happen.. but still..
lol sorry.. but anyways its a great poem

GOOD JOB..I LOVE IT

This poem is really nicely written and has such a good flow. I love doing things that are sexual when theres a chance of being caught, its kind of a rush, like it isn't already lol. anyway I love the poem 5/5

Truly a good read. Describing your secret intimate desires in a way that was very much appealing. I could see nothing wrong with any of this poem. It was fantastic!

Ooh I really like it! but theres only one thing i think is wrong with it...i think the lines are a bit too long cuz by the time ur done reading the line uve already forgotten what the word u rhymed it with was...i mean...im no perfect poet but thats just my opinion...but...great poem

Wow. this was so sensual. I loved it, it was not too graphic and that was what was the best part about it. wonderful job! 5/5

Wow, this is great. I love the structure of the poem and I can see there was so much feelings and thoughts put into this poem to make it this good. Really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work 5/5

The danger keeps on rising, maybe we would get caught.
^ I think it should be "will" not "would".

This was nicee. It wasn't like some of the poems on here which can be sleazy. It was erotic yet classy and was well written. The descriptions were good as was the flow. I liked the emoiton tied into it as well. Nicely done 5/5

Great poem.
You did a good job!
keep up the good work!
5/5

~Chelsea

''Our excitement only increases, playing through this sexual sin.''

I LOVE thst line!! It really caught me.
I liked this, so many explicit poems on here are disgusting, but you managed to keep it sensual and erotic, without making me turn away.
I thought the flow was kind of off in the first stanza, but apart from that, everything was perfect!

Strong poetry. It really makes the reader stop and have to think about what they're reading, which is really what poetry is all about. 5/5

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I loved it! Your really talented!
Your discriptions are great, and your use of wording is brillent!
My fav line was the last,"One day I hope to open up, and for once avoid being ignored."
Very nice, the two best parts in the poem are the begining and the end, very good opening, loved it!
5/5
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WOW uhm...speechless lol....loved it

Very nice poem with good explicit content. The flow and the rhymes are good. tc

That was an amazing poem, good job lolz =)