Haha! You must be really talented =P
You pulled off some great imagery there! Sometimes, I think we are at our best when we don't know what we're doing. Heehee!
I loved it! Great job!
5/5

Great imagery. I love the metaphor. Good job!

Hey, great work, brilliant imagery, although quite sad.
Your rhyming is good, but just abit cliche other than that its amazing, keep writing!
5/5 Steph

Great imagery loved the added in girl imagery. great job 5/5

Good done, i really loved it
(please r/r/c mine too)

That's pretty amazing. "Every drop
My hurt and my pain,
Anguish built up
My lonely soul's rain."
my favorite part.
^_^Parker

Lol. Bored? Well.. either way this was very well written. The emotion and heart was very good. I loved it, nicely done. 4.5/5

Well your boredom turned out a very powerful and amazing poem. i really liked this. your descriptions were very vivid. 5/5

I really like this poem. Very original and creative, creating very lively imagery. Internal pain can be much like the eye of the storm...
The flow was undisturbed and your choice of rhymes were excellent.
A very pleasurable read...5/5 for sure

I really like this poem. Very original and creative, creating very lively imagery. Internal pain can be much like the eye of the storm...
The flow was undisturbed and your choice of rhymes were excellent.
A very pleasurable read...5/5 for sure

Wow that was great i loved it great job

ohh and that you for the commet love linda 5/5

I like this poem as well i like the descriptive words and th imagery is great...keep up the good work.... 5/5..

You have a lot of talent!! i love the imagery, and i like the rhyming! great job1

Forever*Yours