This poem is super deep and full of meaning, Everybody tries to find themselves at one time or another. Excellent job bro 5/5

Lol I got freaked out when I saw the title 'cause I have one called "Just Leave Me Now." Frankly I think yours is awesome! I admit I have a slight fetish for the afterlife references and you weaved them in good. Even if they're not used in an afterlife sense, but more a metaphorical sense I find them cool. Not just that though, the whole poem's good. :D xo

Wow, tripp. I love this.

I wanna get on a taxi, and just leave
until that day I'll hold my breath; not breathe
holding it for my day of release
holding for the day when I finally have peace

^^ that stanza just like, speaks to me. Beautiful work, tripp. keep it up!

ur cut-free friend (for now)
~rAY

Deep! I understand where you are coming from. 5/5