Not sure yet

by Jacob   Jan 6, 2007


I wish I could bare my soul, for all to see,
And no longer live in fear of intimacy.
But here I am again,
Hiding behind some words,
All cause I'm scared to talk to a girl.
So what do you do, when the one you love,
Is in love with another man?
And you can't help but feel unworthy of
her love, whenever you see them hold hands.
It's not that I want to give up or give in,
It's just that my cups been filled to the brim,
And now I'm drowning in the tears from within.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    This poem has got so much meaning, yet it seems so pointless, but if you dont mind - i have a POSSIBLE sollution, u dnt have to use it though

    I wish I could bare my soul for all to see,
    and no longer live with this fear of intimacy.
    Yet here I am, again, weak with honesty.
    Hiding behind pointless words
    because I'm scared, afraid to talk to a girl

    But what can you do,
    when the woman you love,
    loves with another.

    And you can't help but feel undeserving of her love,
    whenever you see them embrace one another
    I don’t want to give up, don’t want to give in,
    nevertheless, I'm drowning in the tears from within.

    but its still a real good poem!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Very very good... loved this part:

    "It's just that my cups been filled to the brim,
    And now I'm drowning in the tears from within."

    really good... keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Aww this is sad but I love it. I can relate 2 it, but from a girls point of view, but I've given up.

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