I have one word - AWESOME! okay more than 1, beautiful, sweet and one of my favorites of yours. Flawless! Inspiring and straight from the heart. Good flow. I love it! 5/5

This one is BRILLIANT!

This one is BRILLIANT!

Those last two lines got to me in a way i can never explain.
I know you said you can't write love poetry Cindy but i think you know you're wrong now cos this is amazing and so are all your others
Keep writing
5/5
*Gem*

Perfect flow. excellant job 5/5

Wow, this is a real good poem! this might sound weird, but it makes me long to be loved! to have that extra special thing, between two ppl, i crave it, and you summed it up so it sounds extra special, great work!

Narc xxx

Wonderful write Cindy, lovely!!!

Cannot beleive i havent come over your poems before! You are so talented, and you remind me of a close friend, her words were always powerful, she always made me smile and feel warm inside, and this poem did exactly the same, and funnily enough, she is the same age as you too. well done, i loved every word of this poem
xxxxxx

Amazing.
So beautiful and filled with the kind of love that everyone hopes for in the world.
Whole poem was simply flawless, there's nothing to fix.
You are one of my most inspirational writers on this whole site! Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Sry, I took so long to return the favor on the comments. I was really busy these last few days and I didn't have time.

Cindy, this is a beautifully written love poem. The flow is perfect and the imagery and rhyme work well. Good job.

This was really good beautifully written. very heartfelt keep it up. xx

Beautiful! and thanks for the comment by the way.

Beautiful, as are all your love poems

Wow. That's really amazing. I usually don't like love poems so much, but this one's just really great. Awesome job.
Love,
Parker

Another wonderful poem cindy, love it, especially the 3rd stanza

"Secret words between us,
I could listen to forever.
As we dance our dance of love,
Just the two of us together."

great flow, and i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up, love these poems!!!

This was really sweet.
I loved the imagery and word choice.
My favourite part was the last stanza, that was really powerful.

I like this poem of ur's alot it's very touching. ^_^

This is really great, once again. You capture everyone's attention with your passionate emotions. well done.

Wow. Amazing.

Very beautifull