by angelina Jan 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I can't take it back, |
by Adelle
A very deep poem clever use of words I like the emotion and flow of this piece. |
by Curry
Wow this is also really sad but it kinda has a happy ending! i love poems like that. but you should never stop writing poems because you are a really good writer.i gave this one a 5. |
by Br0k3n
I went trough most of your poems and I must say you're really good. 'Cause although your lines are short, you capture the feelings very well. And I simply loved this poem, really emotional. |
Very emotional good work |
by Leanne
I had a similar experience to this when i was in school, its a hard thing to have to do. Very well written, yours poems are really good! |