Comments : What did I do?

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This poem is amazing!!!! i absolutely love it!! good job!!
    5/5!

    *Shawte*

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Love this poem its very emotional well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Katy

    I really felt like we have something on common by reading that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    I had a similar experience to this when i was in school, its a hard thing to have to do. Very well written, yours poems are really good!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Spidergirl Jess

    Very emotional good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Br0k3n

    I went trough most of your poems and I must say you're really good. 'Cause although your lines are short, you capture the feelings very well. And I simply loved this poem, really emotional.
    Thank you for the comment you left and the ansewer you looked for. Fin means end and in my work "the final FIN" means death. Hope you get it now ^.^ . If you have any more quests feel free to ask.
    And alert me when you'll write something new. Thanks :)
    Much love, Br0k3n

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this is also really sad but it kinda has a happy ending! i love poems like that. but you should never stop writing poems because you are a really good writer.i gave this one a 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Adelle

    A very deep poem clever use of words I like the emotion and flow of this piece.