So sad! i admit i cried ! good job!

Hey awsome poem! Great rhyming!
Well done!
Love Mel

Oh my gosh Steph this is amazing you made me cry I can relate to this poem in so many ways Thank you so much for writing it

much love Kass

I really liked this one i loved the length because I like reading really long poems and the whole daddy thing made me bawl so nice work! 5/5 *kaila*

10/5

Amazing poem. Very emotional and very real. I loved it 100%

Great job keep it up. You're very talented.

That is a powerful poem...

Wow! U r great! I wish I could be as good as u please write back I would like to talk about poetry and stuff ! Thank u!

Wow! U r great! I wish I could be as good as u please write back I would like to talk about poetry and stuff ! Thank u!

Oh...my...god... you are fantastic. dont ever say you dont think your a good poet. i wish i could write like that; its amazing. you have such a talent. please keep writing.

WOW You are an amazing writer i got tears in my eyes reading that because that peom reminded me of what happend to me when i parents caught me before i did.
Please message me to talk.
i really like your writing
GOOD WORK!!!

WOW
i started to read and didn't wont to stop
and by then i was crying :'(
its so deep and true
i would love to read more
keep you the good work
p.s and you say u dont think ur good
well i think ur great =]

This poem is so sad but so great amazing flow of words amazing writing skills even as I write this my eyes r watering.