This is a really good poem and I totally understand what your going through, excellent job 5/5

Awww..quite sad but lovely. I liked it!
5/5

Very well writtin. I realii loved it. 5/5

The thrill of forbidden love. You did quite well with your poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Good job!

Hey thanx 4 da comment on my poem. But it isn't my feelings. I don't write my feelings in my poems.. Barely. Anywayz thanx

Its very romantic and sweet but a bit sad.. well its great because u had expressed ur emotions very well