by Kris Lynn Jan 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
One of these days, when the wind blows, you'll feel the breeze. |
I love your new style, the way you use those couplets to compliment one another, and create a more solid image on the mind's eye. A poem that is seen rather than read is truly a good poem. I hope you have a few more saved up for the next time you post. It was a pleasure to read. |
Aww. This is such a great poem! I loved the ending! 5/5 for sure! Amazing poem! |