The flow is good, rhymes well, Very nicely done.

Much of emotion, makes sure that guy doesn't hurt you again

Hey great job on this one. very heartfelt good use of words in this one also. lot of emotion. good job xx

Another greeat one.. but i like this one a lot more than the first

Wow! i thought this was great...and so true for some people..good job!

What a beautiful flow, word use, meter. Just an incredible poem. Great possibility to be a finalist.
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5/5
~Stephen White

If there's one memory I don't want to lose,
It's the feeling that I had when I was with you.

You mean so much to me, but you're fading away,
I'll give up everything to just have you one more day.

i love those lines!!!! that is awesome that he asked you out!!!!! 5/5

xoxo kisses