by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Jan 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
[[ This had to deal with the Moon I saw tonight. It hung very low close to the ground and while I was looking at it I wrote this poem. It looked like it was Running Away. I hope you enjoy!!]] |
by Rocky
I really loved the imagery and emotion in that poem and how the moon comforted you |
by Ashla
Wow Amazing! Your a amazing writer! |
by Cindy
This is a very orginal write. The imagination is great. Keep up the good work. |
by Tara Kay
That was very good, i liked the flow and the rhyming. |
I like this poem, but dont get me wong - i think it could stil do with a lot of work! this poem has a lot of potential! A LOT! |