What this short poem proves is you hold a true feeling, and anything written for a true feeling is the best.so great job and a 5/5 from me with the hope to read more of your great works.

I like it. laura xxx btw you been on my fav list for ages lol

Short, sweet and beautiful. I like this a lot. I am puzzled as to why this got voted down and I wish when people did vote down, they would leave their critique in a comment........I give you a 5/5!

Aww this is short but sweet i really liked it!
5/5
luv FallenxFromxGrace

Short but sweet.

This really spoke to me. It's a lovely poem. I'm liking your work to.:)