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by gabriel Jan 7, 2007 category : Love, romance / i love you
I'll cross the ocean Early tomorrow I don't want to admit But I'm full of sorrow My heart has lost It's colour of red I'm no better off Being buried dead I'll long for you During my maiden voyage Your love letters I'll hide in the storage So please let me Breathe you in once more I can't wait to see you When I walk through that door I'll fly the open skies After a week at sea I don't want to say this But will you miss me? I've lost my mind All dark and dreary It's just like hope Not waiting for me I still long for you While up in the air I'll glance the open clouds Wondering if you still care So please let me Feel your kiss again Say you love me In this pouring rain I'll trek the harsh desert Just two months later I don't want to know But please don't falter I've lost my touch One that used to know Your soft, tender breath In the frosty snow Longing for your love In the desert dry I desire for you but There's no tears left to cry So please let me Touch you one more time Hold me close And say you'll be mine I'll be coming home In about four hundred days Things would have differed In many, many ways By then I'd have lost My mind and soul But would you have changed Like the weather gone cold? As always I long For your precious touch Never in my life Have I missed someone so much So please let me hear From your heart so true Those longing words Simply, "I love you"
by Daniel Rutter
Nice poem. Absolutely perfect the way you set that out! :) I like the last bit best: *So please let me hear From your heart so true Those longing words Simply, "I love you"* hehe...:D 5/5 for excellence ;)