Something about this poem is calming... maybe its your ability to make it sound calming while writing it. i love the rhyme, and the poem in general.
good job x rob
5/5

Written greatly with a talent, you are a talented person and keep up the great job like always. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

The flow was really good,i could just see a girl walking and telling the story of the poem.it was definitly a 5/5
--lexie

Independent is what she is,
Silent are her cries.
Her inner beauty glows,
Deep within her eyes.

^^That is my favorite part. You have a way with words. I loved the flow and heart. Nicely done. 4.6/5

The flow of this poem is perfect, great poem rona, love the choice of words, i give this poem a 5/5!!!

Wow, this poem was very soothing and spiritual. "To experience sunsets." I think you should change that to watch the sunset. It flows/sounds better.
great job
5/5

That is a very beautiful poem Rona. It has a great flow to it, and the rhyming doesn't read as if it's forced. I also really appreciated the imagery you put into this poem, that made it so much better to read, seeing her walking in the sand with the sunset etc. Lovely poem. 5/5 =]

Tammie

Wow, i love poems with inspiration!
This was really deep, you have alot of talent
well done
xxxxxx

Wow this flowed really well. Fantastic. I liked it,it sort of sent me away. Like in the poem. It represented alot.. Wow. xx

This poem is amazing 5/5
I especially loved this stanza:
Independent is what she is,
Silent are her cries.
Her inner beauty glows,
Deep within her eyes.

This is my favourite poem i've read of yours so far, the calmness you described in it kind of made me calm while i was reading it.

Independent is what she is,
Silent are her cries.
Her inner beauty glows,
Deep within her eyes

That stanza was fantastic, really made an impression.
5/5

I really enjoyed the idea of this poem, but I think it would have been better served if you tried a different format, rather than the standard four line stanza and the abcb rhyme scheme. This was a good read, though, I enjoyed it.

The wording was fantastic, as was the emotion and flow. another 5/5

Wow. I have to say that this is probably my favorite. The feelings and images that it evokes are wonderful.I enjoyed these lines:

"Independent is what she is,
Silent are her cries.
Her inner beauty glows,
Deep within her eyes."

Absolutely beautiful. *5/5