Eyes wide shut

by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~   Jan 7, 2007


Eyes wide shut,
Freezing hot,
Bitter sweet,
Yes your not,

Feeling confused?
Too complicated?
Is this not,
What u anticipated?

Well this is What,
Is inside my head,
The felling is like,
I'm alive but dead,

My head is so full,
That its actually not,
My heart is so cold,
But in fact its really hot,

I don't know why i feel this way,
or what I'm supposed to do,
Am i the only one that feels like this?
Or do you feel it too?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    "The felling is like,
    I'm alive but dead,"

    - My favourite part, I know how that feels

    But I think you mean 'feeling' instead of felling'
    I really liked it. It was captivating and meaningful.
    5/5, Nice work

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I liked this poem, the flow was great, word choice wonderful the message loud and clear 5/5 very deep

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Feeling confused?
    Too complicated?
    Is this not,
    What u anticipated?

    ^^I LOVED THAT PART. Great emotion and wonderful depth. Nicely done!

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