by CondescendingHeart Jan 7, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
The music is going, |
I like this poem alot!... a very unexpected ending.. i thought the girl was going to leave with that guy.. lol which im sure was intendeed... i love that.. enexpected endings.. its always a really nice touch.. spectuacular write.. good imagery and great rhyme.. another amazing poem |