Tears of shame

by emptysole   Jan 7, 2007


Tears of shame run down my face,
for i let loss the love,
i needed to embrace,
looking down from above,
i see my pitiful cry's,
need to fight for the true love,
but the love i take always dies.

Tears of shame run down my face,
i took her for granted,
the love is gone with out a trace,
wish my feet had been firmly planted,
to scared to hand over my heart,
to scared to commit,
was one thing i new from the start.

Tears of shame run down my face,
for i new i loved her
it was all set at the right pace,
it always seemed a blur,
but i new the love was true,
but to seldom said,
i love you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    That's a very sweet poem, yet so sad. It flowed nicely, and showed alot of emotion with nice rhyming. Nice poem, keep it up. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Ahhhhh that is soo cute keep up the good work

    love L. I . N .D. A.

    can you please comment on of my poems thank you! thank you lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nice job. I like the repetition of "Tears of shame run down my face"

    ("for i new i loved her" should be knew and "to scared" should be "too" both typos happen twice.)

    Sad and heartfelt emotion in this piece. 5/5

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