Nice job. I like the repetition of "Tears of shame run down my face"

("for i new i loved her" should be knew and "to scared" should be "too" both typos happen twice.)

Sad and heartfelt emotion in this piece. 5/5

Ahhhhh that is soo cute keep up the good work

love L. I . N .D. A.

can you please comment on of my poems thank you! thank you lol

That's a very sweet poem, yet so sad. It flowed nicely, and showed alot of emotion with nice rhyming. Nice poem, keep it up. =] 5/5

Tammie