Winter birds

by XfromwithinX   Jan 7, 2007


When the winter sun starts to fall,
all of the winter birds start to call.
They say "oh my little darlin' its time to go back to our nest,
its time to go back and rest.
The winter birds fly together as one,
and swoop and glide until the last beam has shone.
They will scatter and will skit in the roof of a house,
and hunched in the corner is a tiny scared mouse.
Its small body shudders as the birds close on in,
They need to feed so it can't be a sin.

(this was a kinda experiment I'm not quite sure whether it works though..)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite – most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future.

  • 17 years ago

    by Say Goodbye and Go

    That poem totally works! very good job, nice descriptions about nature, loved it
    -say goodbye and go

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Its nice good poem little mushy
    for me but im sure everyone will
    like it. check out my new one
    I AM YOUR DISEASE. its wield but
    i hope you like it, i try to do what you
    said space it and make it sing.
    cy

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Not to bad
    =]

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