Not to bad
=]

Its nice good poem little mushy
for me but im sure everyone will
like it. check out my new one
I AM YOUR DISEASE. its wield but
i hope you like it, i try to do what you
said space it and make it sing.
cy

That poem totally works! very good job, nice descriptions about nature, loved it
-say goodbye and go

I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite – most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future.