I sure like the way you write,
my favorite part.

THE DARK IN ME SEARCHES
WITHOUT END THE MYSTERY
AND BEAUTY IN PAIN
WOW''''''' and last verse another
WOW''''' 5/5 BUT you already
know this is good. i can see you after
you wrote this. probably sat back
read it over and WOW'''''right? don't
lie.you know its good.

thanks for your comments. especially
on my ' BETRAYED' what you said meant more to me than you could ever
imagine. everything good with us again. i just wish i could find a way off
cocaine its been kicking my ass for
a long time and i m surprise she's
been with me this long.
any thats another poem.
check out my daughers friend's poems . they're pretty good she's
15 and in with a bunch of people
that think getting high every weekend
is the thing to do i;ve been trying
to make her see that there more to life then that. the world does'nt
another drug addict. it does need
her through.

her poems are under name.
jessica lynn some titles are
im 15 confused life's a game

Wow, you sound exactly like the girl I wrote about in the poem of mine you commented on! Great writing by the way, I totally know where you are coming from.