My Whole World

by Gem   Jan 7, 2007


I wish that I could tell you
How I've felt for so long
But I know if I try to speak
The words will come out wrong

I know that we're already friends
But I want it to be more
Cos the feelings that I have for you
Burn right down to the core

I can only hope as time goes by
You will feel the same about me
Cos all I want is to be with you
Thats the way my life should be

You know that I will wait forever
For a chance to be your girl
Cos if i'm being honest with myself
You're the one, you're my whole world ©

*Gem*

(An old one i wrote when Marcus was just the guy from Media class...)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Awwww i LOVED IT!!!!!!!! it was very sweet, and to the point. i liked the beging were it said something like i cant tell you , it will all comw out wrong or something i loved that part well keep up the good work 5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Omg...this is excellent.... if you dont mind i would really like to read this poem to someone that means alot to me..

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Amazing i like this tyle..ice emotion..great stuff

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Omg that was soo cute and beautiful just yesterday i found some of my old poems i had written about harry, even the first one l0l neway great job darl xx

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    I know how this feels! I felt the same way about Jake in the beginning! I loved the poem. Flow and rhyming were great!
    xoxo

    P.S. I'm missing your comments! lol

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