Awww. i liked this one a lot. It's very sweet. Good job Gem, and thanks for helping out with that contest.
Oh yeah, i'm the one HOLDING the burned bridges contest. heehee...so that's an example! Glad you liked it though.
Charisma*

Short but sweet. I especially like the the first stanza.

wish that I could tell you
"How I've felt for so long
But I know if I try to speak
The words will come out wrong"
Anticipation of a young new love.....and now he's yours!
Nice flow. 5/5.

Awesome write. reminds me of the feelings I had for that special friend before she became my soul mate. 5/5

I know how this feels! I felt the same way about Jake in the beginning! I loved the poem. Flow and rhyming were great!
xoxo

P.S. I'm missing your comments! lol

Omg that was soo cute and beautiful just yesterday i found some of my old poems i had written about harry, even the first one l0l neway great job darl xx

Amazing i like this tyle..ice emotion..great stuff

lissa

Omg...this is excellent.... if you dont mind i would really like to read this poem to someone that means alot to me..

Awwww i LOVED IT!!!!!!!! it was very sweet, and to the point. i liked the beging were it said something like i cant tell you , it will all comw out wrong or something i loved that part well keep up the good work 5/5 always
Kate~