by Gem Jan 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I see you around |
And i bet u still get like that..we all do and i think its too* not to in line 16. great stuff nie emotion. |
by dora
Great job with this one.=) its so cute and also its so good to c how far use have come now and how happy and in love u are. =) xx |
You never cease to amaze me darling! I loved it! Keep this up! I know how you feel! I love your love poems, they remind me soo mucha of me and Jake! Loved it! |
by *Charisma*
I liked the last two stanzas best. they were sweet and cheerful. Nice conclusion to a poem describing feelings we've all had. |
by lisa
Great job gem!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really like this one |