Heartbroken (Acrostic)

by Gem   Jan 7, 2007


He broke my heart to pieces
Each shard cracked and splintered
All I ever knew and cherished
Ripped cruelly away from me
Time and time again I tried
But it was never enough
Real love wasn't enough
Our love wasn't meant to be, it
Kills me inside to realise that
Everything we had was just
Never meant to last... ©

*Gem*
05/01/07

(Fiction poem, Marcus could never break my heart.)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darkbreath

    Very good poem. This one describes the way I am feeling at this moment. People can find themselfs in it... Excelent. compliments about your writing anyways, i am enjoying reading the poems

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl this one was great. great use of words and luckily its not true =p anyway good job xx

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Wanted to say Congrats! on your 200th poem. good job!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lovely darling! Lovely words and very good imagery! I loved it!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Short and sad. Always a good job from you :)

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