Dont worry most of its metaphorical, like i've only done pot once its a metaphor

This is good cuz its short but still kind of tells u stuff bout u

Thank you for your comments, I love your work as well! great job!

Damn deep dude, seriously good one...dark at the same time...you should aim at writting dark love poems, it may suit you...

For such a short and simple poem, it has a lot of depth indeed
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

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Yes, "the dentist" & "cold rain" are real. thank you for the comments cy. u think i'm good-well i think the same about you. your poems are outstanding. i gave you a 5 for all of them. you're top on my favorites! keep 'em coming! you've got a gift.

Though it was short, this poem was excellent in its abruptness and how it was straight to the point. good job!

Short and humbly sweet. Great writer. You have to write more and keep me posted. Brilliant stuff... Read up on my new ones. Drop of Death and a one that makes you think(Breathe to Death) <--- Analyze that poem for a hidden message :)

-=[Crying_Angel]=-

I like this-sounds alot like my life.

very well done

october xx

Okey dokey i wont do that no more than with the words
thanks for the tip!
and this a rilly good short poem
I <3 it

Y do u gotta make them so sad?? they almost make me cry!!! but yea.. i really do like this one actually its really short and has lots of meaning and it almost seems as if your there with them ans understand what they go through and i know we dont know each other but do u gotta myspace??? i think we should be friends...u seem really cool!!

Thanx for all your comments, they help me alot... Short n sweet, thats the way I like it.. keep um comen and keep up with the comments, thanx for a great poem

Short...but so to the point. lol loved it...another 5/5!

I dig it.

I love it and thanx for the coments...I was in that place in life not to long ago and now ur poem really speacks to me

Ahhh! *speaks...lol my brain doesnt function properly this late at night

Still beautiful even if it is shorter.

Your words stabbed me in the heart. so brutally true... i have and am dealing with the same thing =)

I like this because it's so short, but has such a powerful meaning.

Wonderful job.
5/5