by Landi Cordier Jan 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Rarely does a boy catch my eye |
by Rachel RTVW
* I think it was cute and sweet and you did a good job on this form. When you have rules to follow in formed poetry it makes your task harder. I think you did a nice job with the simple words! |
*. sorry i forgot to put that. my bad. |
This was kind of too short for me to begin thinking. But I'll be nice and give you a 5/5, |
* um.. yeah i dont really like this poem.. i understand that this is the layout its supposed to be i just think the words you used were really simple and elemental.. and didnt really say much of an emotion |