* um.. yeah i dont really like this poem.. i understand that this is the layout its supposed to be i just think the words you used were really simple and elemental.. and didnt really say much of an emotion

This was kind of too short for me to begin thinking. But I'll be nice and give you a 5/5,

*. sorry i forgot to put that. my bad.

* I think it was cute and sweet and you did a good job on this form. When you have rules to follow in formed poetry it makes your task harder. I think you did a nice job with the simple words!