Wow, this is a real beautiful poem! its a real good write! oh, and could you plz tell me what other 14 poems you would like me to comment on plz!

Narc xxx

Wow i definitally love this poem. i got confused though cause im a moron. but then i understood it lol. I LOVEEE ITS

That was a great poem. I loved your use of winter as her season. It was pretty yet sorrowful at the same time. I enjoyed how you kept the first and last stanza the same. Beautiful poem! Thanks for entering my contest!
Charisma*

Thanks for commenting on my poem =)this one is really good. i love the way it flows and how the first and last stanza are the same. very very good!!! i really love it! keep writting

This is another beautiful poem becca, i mean it, your very good, one thing i could see is that you didnt capitalize the title"She Lives Only In Winter", but thats minor, love this poem too, 5/5!!!and thanx for commenting my poem, it meant alot,

I like this one a lot becca!

This is beautiful. I love the repetition. The flow and imagery were good. Nice job!

Again, brilliant. This was beautifully written. I love poems with references to the four seasons, especially when they are written in different contexts.

"She lives only in winter
Away from the springs rain
Away from heartbreak summer
And all of autumn’s pain"

That stanza was my favourite.

I liked seeing you put in the seasons. The living in winter thing reminds me of riding in a car when its raining. It had that kind of tone. A real meloncholy piece. I like those.

I enjoyed this poem most out of the three. I think it's the best one out of the three too. I like the structure in which you wrote it. And the flow was good too.

Tammie

The flow was very good, the structure was good, the repition worked well again.
The imagery was okay, I liked this one alot.
keep it up
much love, Tara-Kay

Wow.
That was wonderful. Beautifully written yet sad to read about losing the one you love.
Your emotions were portrayed very well, great rhyming structure, and fantastic imagery. Overall, excellent job! =] 5/5

Stephanie.

Awww, this was beautiful and sad, I loved it. The rhymes were beautiful, and every word fit together perfectly, I could really feel the emotion in this poem. Great work.

--steph

* hey, I really like this poem. Even though you repeat 'she lives only in winter' it doesn't get boring. :) Really good. oh, this poem also has a great structure!

x

Another sad poem hope you'r well and poetry helps you to asses your emotions you certainly pour your heart into your poetry.

Hey another fantastic poem!! great rhyming and flow all throughout the poem. i don't think i came across one bit that didn't really flow as well. i think the ideas you used were great, and i loved how you repeated "she lives only in winter" at the start of each line. 5/5.. keep up the good work :)

''She lives only in winter
In a world that is unsure
In a world of make-believe
And a world where he loves her''

That was my favourite stanza int he poem, I think it was fantastic.
The whole poem was beautiful and flowed very well.
Excellent work.

Becca
Beautiful poem. I really loved it. It just flowed so well as I read it. I loved the way you used the winter. My favorite season so the title really grabed me. Take Care Cindy

Wow! I loved this. It really is a beautiful poem. The rhyming was perfest, as well as the flow. 5/5

marcella

Oh wow! this is such a wonderful poem. the vivid mental images that were conjured in my mind were just swell! & your writing style & word choice was excellent!
5/5