u showed me a place higher than the sky
everytime i was with you i felt like i could fly
i got a reason to live so now i can't die
unfortunately i have to say good bye;
it burns me inside
it hurts me inside and
it kills me
but i guess thats how it should be
please find a place in your heart to remember me;
because thats how much you mean to me
bless you, cus you showed me a place higher than the sky
bless you, cus everytime i was with you i felt like i could fly
then again i don't have to say good bye
cus u will always be the 1 that stays on my side
Aw i liked this poem
it was really sweet.
the rhyme scheme and the transitions were good
i like how the middle part kinda interrupts everything
i really liked these 2 lines
please find a place in your heart to remember me;
because thats how much you mean to me
good job
5/5
=D