Hey Missy

This is a wonderfall poem. 5/5
Kalee

I love this poem, and all your writing!!!
you have sooo much talent!!!

luv 4ever and a day, erin

I really especially like

Look at my eyes
they shine with glee
though I've seen
your pain and misery.

AHHHHHHHHH! i totally rank this a 5! i love it! my favorite part:::
See this bucket
with water inside
it is your tears
I've caught every time

really great job. ;) peace out dawg

What a poem!! i rele love it. very touching one .. u are talented so keep it up.

thx for da comment btw.

Wow i really liked this! definitely 5/5 the way it flowed and the ending....it was all just like...perfect! u definitely know wat ur doing so keep it up
x!x

5/5
loves it :D

WAY TO GO!!!

WAY TO GO!!!

This was beautifully written. I love your technique. Thank you so much for the kind words. <3

I can't believe it... its so good I think you might just be the best. Its deep and good and will touch you there. It makes even thos with out a heart care. I didn't rate it because I can't so here is what I give it. 100/100 so plz keep it up.

I hope you read some of mine...

I can't believe it... its so good I think you might just be the best. Its deep and good and will touch you there. It makes even thos with out a heart care. I didn't rate it because I can't so here is what I give it. 100/100 so plz keep it up.

I hope you read some of mine...