Comments : Affliction, Addiction, Disease

  • 16 years ago

    by miss kaybae

    Hell yea i love this.
    and it DOES have me writtin all over it..
    haha. thanks much :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Jeanne

    I think it's alot deeper then it seems to be.
    it's awesome.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Cy that poem was outstanding...very deep\and twisted, but soooo true......your better than that.

  • 16 years ago

    by Katy

    All I can say is WOW!!! This has to be one of the best poems on addiction I have ever read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rhiannon

    I know I'm crazy, so I must not be.

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    You were right I did like it. Great poem ery well written and so ery true. Did you read my poem called The Dope Game? You'll like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Adam Ramsey

    Yeah, that was right up my alley.

    I like that alot, especially as an aspiring musician cause it seems like it was meant to be sung.

  • 16 years ago

    by StillxBreathing

    Thats some crazy awesome shit. =] loved it

    hahah..... wow.

  • 16 years ago

    by lorie

    Omg its so ......so....*snif* beautiful...

  • 16 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    I like this one. i enjoyed it alot. nice flow. you got good rhymes too. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Yeah this poem is very wild as you said. its good though . This shows a lot of power, a person in power, in command. showed it very well I liked it. its a good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by FLOWer

    I love. i can totally relate to it. I can also relate to where u say that u feel more. I feel likea i feel double thaan the averaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaage myself.a

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Hey this was an extremely deep and powerful poem
    I was captivated by each word.
    It seems like a very tragic situation but never the less another outstanding write from you which has left many people thinking!!!!
    Take care!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by HeatherP

    Wow this poem was amazing my favorite lines were.

    A little on the edge.
    Put your head in the Noose, you know I'm here for you I'll never let you lose.

    Absolutly beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fatal

    Wow...this was powerful.....alittle sick....but i like sick....keep it up....

    keep on keeping on...*FATAL*.....

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    I really like this. it's very well written. i've read most of yours, they're all amazing! =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Angel in moonlight

    Wow this is an amazing peace of art gave me chills!! really great!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Emotiionsz

    100% dark & Twisted [ in a good way of course]

    I loved it 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Wow. you can feel anger, saddness, desperation, and control all in one. this is a really good poem. i like it how it is. very goo wite. your an amazing writer i love your work.

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, this is really good. I enjoyed it thoroughly and it makes a lot of sense. Very powerful, 5/5. Em