I really liked this poem! The concept was awesome and the imagery as well. I really like the fact that you used reference to paintings and painters and brush strokes.
Wonderful!
5/5

Amazing!
You are a very talented writer

I REALLY loved you poem, the word you put amazing words into sentences is extrodinary and i really liked your use of fairies in your poem. Cos fairies rule KEEP IT UP
Cherish x

This is an amazing poem
I hope you feel better... 5/5

Very original, I can tell it has a lot of meaning. It is very well written, great job on it.

---Ashley

Wow, that was amazing. I loved it! You are very good keep up the amazing work. and thank you for commenting!
Burning~Wings

That has got to be the best poem i have read. no joke. brilliant.

Thanks for the comment on my poem, it meant alot to see that someone appreciates the feelings of my heartache :)...i really love this poem, you used such descriptive words that it literally "painted" a picture of the pain you underwent. I hope that things get better for you. i gave it a 5...it deserves a 10 but they dont' have it on here lol
thanks again
~*~Amber~*~

Hey, wow this poem is really deep and meaningful. the words are put together well.
Talk soon
**Em**

Hey, wow this poem is really deep and meaningful. the words are put together well.
Talk soon
**Em**

Woah ur poems are so long, to be honest i cant be bothered reading them, but i shall complement you about the first few lines, ur a great poet, thanks for the comment ;)

This was absolutely beautiful. Deep and great emotion. 5/5

Thanks for the comment on mine. Keep up the great work.

Chelsey

Wow i dont know how to describe the feeling you have made me fell by depicting so much pain in your words. You are truely an excellent poet. Keep it up. && thanks for the comment on mine. It meant alot. =D

XoXo-Kayy

Amazing poem, i love it so much you dont even know. Its a VERY good poem. Probley could get published one day. You seem like an astonishing poet and you should keep writing.
-Kera

Amazing poem, i love it so much you dont even know. Its a VERY good poem. Probley could get published one day. You seem like an astonishing poet and you should keep writing.
-Kera

Beautiful. That just summed up my life.

Incredible. I love the flow, the word use, the pattern, and the meaning that is so obviously revealed. I know just how you feel.
I believe that you could've ended it stronger, but the beginning and middle were strong and made up for the weaker ending.
I especially love this as a couplet:

"There's an artist with his palette,
But there's only one colour he'll need"

great job
5/5
♥
~Stephen White

That is my fav poem so far... fantastic job
Sunshine

Wow. that's amazing. if i had time i'd read more, but for now you're just going to go on my favorites and i'll read more poems later.

i hope you're better now.
this is a truly spectacular poem.
i love the vocab used and
how it perfectly describes what you went through using these great metaphores. AMAZING
100/5

I really like this poem. it's easy for me to understand, but at the same time it has a LOT of meaning.