You Feel

by caitlin   Jan 7, 2007


Close your eyes
and I'll tell you what it's like to feel
Image a soft violin playing,
Then he spins you
onto the dance floor, and you know it's real
Then he spins you
and softly you feel his finger outline the way of your jaw
Then he spins you
and you feel your hand settle onto his chest
Then he spins you
and you feel him cup your chin like a fragile nest
Then he spins you
but this time you glide apart
and finally you feel the break
of heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Good... very good, i liked it. Me myself im not into the whole repeating thing but i still liked it good job. Keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Raelyn

    Wow thats great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Its good, i like the ending alot. Just try not to repeat yourself, and mayeb try to ryhme a lil more. Other then that its good and I like it.
    COLBY

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