by caitlin Jan 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Close your eyes |
by Colby
Good... very good, i liked it. Me myself im not into the whole repeating thing but i still liked it good job. Keep it up 5/5 |
by Raelyn
Wow thats great. |
by Colby
Its good, i like the ending alot. Just try not to repeat yourself, and mayeb try to ryhme a lil more. Other then that its good and I like it. |