Beautiful...I hope this isn't something that happened to you, it's a hard thing to go through. Your poem was beautiful, one of your best...I can relate and I loved reading it. 5/5.

Wow, Hunny. This was absolutley beautiful. It was such a sad story.. But, wow. It is very breathtaking. It flowed so flawlessly & the rhymes were great. They didn't seem forced AT ALL.

A waterfall of tears
cascades from her eyes
as the last leaf falls
and the moon light dies.

As promises crumbled
And lies were shared
As hearts beat faster
and eyes were scared

^ These two stanzas; amazing.. Honestly. I loved the use of personification. It makes the poem so much better.

their future is gone,
and ripped at the seems
buried with memories
pictures and dreams.

^ I loved this stanza. I can totally relate to it.. & it was so beautiful.

Amazingly beautifully penned, dear.

I adored it.

Bri [x]