Comments : Maybe

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    I beat my pen to that same thump thump thump unfortuneately, well done, this describes the frustration incredibly well.. Liked the ending :)

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, thank you for sharing
    XXXXXXXXXXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Hehe, The amount of times i've looked down at my page and seen stars and hearts and other meaningless doodles, i've wondered the same thing, lol
    Excellent write Lu, you really got the point across so that every writer can relate =)
    5/5 for sure
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Luanne, you rock. This is awesome! Skip the art and keep writing my friend.

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Against a brick wall I beat my pen
    to the tune of writer's block
    thump, thump thump

    Well, this certainly discribes frustration with a vengence. Been there, done that. No better time to write about writer's block than when you're in the throws of it.

    Well done
    Auntie Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    We all get a block once in a while :) i really liked reading this one it made me smile, i always get a block wheni try to think of a tittle :))

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    Oh darlin.

    Writer's block is a stinker. But obviously it doesn't affect you too much. This poem was very effective. I loved it. So, maybe you should get "writer's block" more often! Lol.

    And you can't be an aritist instead of a poetess...

    Because then I wouldn't have the joy of talking to you all the time!! And that would be heartbreak! :(