WHAT i ABS0LUTELY L0VE AB0UT THiS P0EM iS THE EM0Ti0N......U C0ULD ACTUALLY FEEL WHAT iS G0iNG 0N..AS iF U WERE THAT PERS0N FEELiNG EVERYTHiNG(WELL AT LEAST F0R ME iT FELT THAT WAY) i LUVED iT..DNT ST0P WRiTiNG P0EMS
THAT WAS BEAUTiFUL!
♥ JUSTiNA

Very Very nice! the pain just flows though the words...ouch! i hope this didn't really happen to you. it has happened to me. keep up the GREAT works!!!!
Izzy Bear

Bloody excellent poem, very sweet bud sad

Amazing..i LUV the repitition in this poem it never letz me 4get wat exactly ur talkin about..great poem!

Very well written...LOVED it lol its good to hear something real....it wasnt forced or fake it was good
thanx cya