I loved this Gem!
You have such a way with words!
I loved it babe!
I'm glad to see you writing more poems lately!
xoxo

Sweet poem. the last line in the 2nd stanza interrupts the flow a bit. But i know it's older so I'm not sure you're into editing it...so it's just a suggestion!
Charisma*

Hey darl i think i can relate to some of the lines in this one. it was very well written/ very touching and sad. keep it up. xx

Gem, you just so good with your tributes to love even when they are sad. Excellent job!

This poem is excellent. I really like it a lot. This is how I felt towards my girlfriend.

Great, diff. style but i really enjoyed it ur so talent4ed.

lis

"It is true, I treated 'us'
With not a lot of care
But I never saw the day
That you wouldn't be there"

this is my favorite part....great poem!