WOW! Great ending. i loved that...that was SUPER powerful! Enjoyed the whole thing, but especially that ending. Really summed it up and warns you to not trust quickly, and to still be cautious when you do!
Charisma*

"They pretend that their your friend
And that they are on your side
But then you hear the rumours start
And you realise they lied"

I loved this stanza hun! Lovely poem was always! The ending was really good too! I loved it! Keep it up!
xoxo

Hey darl this was really powerful and deep and it touched me heaps. something i could relate to and everyone else can t0o. it was very well written. xx

You hit the nail right on the head with this one. lol I really enjoyed this one.

But out of all the stories
There's one major thing I've learned
Backstabbers are only powerful
When you've got your back turned ©
^^^
Absolutely true Gem. You defiantely hit the nail on the head with this stanza.

And whooohoo I added a new word to my vocabulary today ..... sussed.....
A word I would have never had the pleasure of knowing if it had not been for your poem.
A great read Gem!

Take care deary

I LOVED THIS POEM. NOW IT IS FOR THESE REASONS I JUST DONT TRUST PEOPLE - MUCH! GREAT POEM, YOU GOT THE WARNING ACROSS EXCELLENTLY.

KELLY
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