Sweetest Sacrifice

by BeautifulxMess   Jan 8, 2007


Walking in the moonlit night with you.
Gazing into your precious freckled face.
It's a breathtaking feeling being your love.
A subliminal feeling that you can't replace.

I can feel the warmth you have in your arms.
I can see your love unfold in your green eyes.
I can touch the lust you feel in your hand.
And with you I keep my wings in the open skies.

Our love is real and a first-time innocence.
But something that can't vanish into air.
We have something that stays forever.
Something that will always be there.

Holding your hand into the graceful night.
It feels like a dream being in your heart.
I know that you'll never disown me for anything.
I'll sacrifice all I have for you to never fall apart.

For you are the sweetest sacrifice I have.
If you were to leave, but I would have to live.
I'll give up anything to keep you with me.
I'd give my life to you, because it's all I have to give.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    Wonderful! I thought the poem is great! It was very well-written. I loved how you wrote it, the flow was excellent and I especially love the last stanza! Very touching! Well done!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is so nicely written. I know the feelings of being in love, especially the first time you fall in love. You feel untouchable and you feel that your love will last forever. But love like everything can die, so always be careful and never take it for granted. Excellent job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is sweet and beautiful. I also like this stanza:

    "Our love is real and a first-time innocence.
    But something that can't vanish into air.
    We have something that stays forever.
    Something that will always be there"

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Great job! i like how i could actually see what you were writing, like i was there or something. anyways, you're a great writer, and i totally luv this poem!

    *Shawte*

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    I dont know who down voted but the were dumb, this poem is tres bien, i especially like the 2nd stanza because of the repition of the first word, great poem taylor, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

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