by Sarah Ann Jan 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
All I see are mere illusions |
by Laura
I can really ralate to this write. The flow was great and I luv your style. |
by Darien
Wow Sarah, that was really intense! That does seem like something to be afraid of. I thought this was a clever poem. Had a few ideas what the phobia might have been.. not quite sure, but it was a good poem. Keep it up! |
by Tara Kay
That was very good, i really saw that you put alot of efforth into it, it didnt flow as well as it could have done, but the power and emotion overshadows that. |
by Liz
I deleted it! you can add this one: myspace.com/poetess203 Kay? Kay. |
by Liz
FSDKLFJS. Finally a new poem!!! Okay. This was just amazing. So intense and full of emotion. |