FSDKLFJS. Finally a new poem!!! Okay. This was just amazing. So intense and full of emotion.
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"My phobia is rising...
In so much danger, but cannot scream
Still drowning in his vanity
Still living in a dream."
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^^ I loved that stanza. This poem was incredible, Sarah. I loved it!! Write more, please? ;P

-` Liz

I deleted it! you can add this one: myspace.com/poetess203 Kay? Kay.

That was very good, i really saw that you put alot of efforth into it, it didnt flow as well as it could have done, but the power and emotion overshadows that.
well done
xx

Wow Sarah, that was really intense! That does seem like something to be afraid of. I thought this was a clever poem. Had a few ideas what the phobia might have been.. not quite sure, but it was a good poem. Keep it up!

I can really ralate to this write. The flow was great and I luv your style.