by Shimmering Diamond Jan 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I don't understand this, |
Ahah, i was in a rush to type this one up after i wrote it down on the paper =S, sorry will check next time a lil more |
by Bryan
This is very good, 5th line (an) should be (am) 6th line (it) should be (is) but its still a excellent poem kristy, loved the flow, 5/5!!! love your poems, keep it up!!! |