Wow, this is so so so sad, i hope you friend is ok! the flow is great and you rhyming is also awsome! you have improved alot since last i read your work!
Love Steph

Nicce poem

Thx jessie-mikaa...hope u get over the live @ much thing u seemed pretty upset earlier...i mean...obviously u were but im sure u'll be over it soon love ya lol jk

and thx steph

YA! thats Me! i cancelled mi otha account tho! love ya xx Steph

Aw thanks. Im almost over it :] I still get to see a couple ours of her plus Im not going to miss House ^.^

Lmao...cant miss house can ya...lol

And steph...how come ur never on msn?

AHH u blocked me..i see how it is lmao

Omgosh this poem is soo sad.. but its really great i like it a lot.. but i wouldnt put "in the 3rd stanza..i meant to say she hid her sisters in the closet while he hit her...but it didnt fit together like that " it just makes you seem week in your writing.. its sounds fine without the explanation.. poetry should be left open for interpretation.. but there really is no need to explain the third stanza..

anyways other than that lol i love it!

Omg dats sad i hope god takes care of her i pray dat nothing else will go worng the devil wil get into ppl like this plz keep her in your prayers

Aww this is really sad... Too many children go through abuse at the hands of the people who are supposed to love them more than anything... The rhythmn and flow was superb throughout, and although very sad it was an excellent piece of work... Well done 5/5 xx

I hope your friend manages to put all the past behind her and has a better, happier future.

Hey
thanks for the poem:p
see u some time ;)