Comments : Fragile Mindset

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Jeannie I must say, what great uniqueness this poem holds. I think there is not a topic beneath the sun that you can not write about.
    I am like a child on Christmas day, with my eyes glowing as I wonder what is held beneath the title of your poems. And as I click that button I am never disappointed as to what is revealed beneath the title.

    A constant battle
    between heart and soul
    Leaving the mind
    to judge the final outcome
    With torrid fear, it waits
    ^^^^
    Wonderfully penned!
    As was the entire piece.

    Take care, my dear friend

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very unusual poem. very different style for you. I guess it was good, but it was hard for me to really understand which is partially due to the fact that the t.v.'s on lol.
    Charisma*