Comments : Recollections

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Into the depths of darkness
    I sadly walk alone
    Among the burning ashes
    of a love that's dead and gone.
    ^^^
    I, the reader can feel the sadness pouring through this stanza.

    The title fits so perfectly. Or was it the poem fit perfectly to the title.
    If you are like me there are times I start with a title then move on to writing the poem and other times it is vice-versa .
    No matter Jeannie a very touching poem indeed.

  • 17 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    Beautiful poem. It's wonderfully written. Thankyou.

  • 17 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    Beautiful poem. It's wonderfully written. Thankyou.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Beautiful. i was wondering, do you use a specific rhyme scheme...like every line has so many syllables, because you are consistent with your flow. It's amazing how easy your poems are to read.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Wow. Beautifully sad. The flow was perfect. I like this a lot. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    This was so beautiful!! I really liked the last ine I thought it ended so perfectly. The flow was very good and the imagery was great.