Time

The clock keeps ticking.
Time is going by real slow.
I feel my breath escaping.
I can't breath!
Finally, time stops.
I'm finally at peace.

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Did You Like This Poem?

16 years ago
by cory

You proved that a poem doesn't have to be long or rhyme to be great.good job!! 5/5
16 years ago
by J u l e s

Very short yet good <333
16 years ago
by Abu3li

Sweet poem

nicely written

keep it up
17 years ago
by Fading Memories

A very expressive yet short poem. Makes it sound like death is painless and easy to succumb to.

Nadia

5/5
17 years ago
by Kaz

Deep wrds.. makes death sound so comfortable nd beautiful much better thn wat life is