WOW!! Great poem!! It looks like you put alot of effort in it. I love the words and how they fall together. Great Job!!
5/5

~Shae

Hey yeah I like the poem but you seem like you acually do this?? Is that true?? You might one day end loosing it for ever and never getting anything that you left behind baack so Im just wondering if thats why you wrote a poem that sounded so into it?? Ok well and this isnt InnocentGirlNot its her friend and I like the poem so dont take it bad!

Omg!! WOW this is really good. i love it. it is so deep..i feel the emotion behind it. great job!

I love this poem so much.... amanda wow i really like how this one was written..... it really is awesome but sad... lol i started crying kinda gay i know but its way sad.... love ya

Hey there. It was a great poem, I just hope you don't cut yourself? If you do, I know what you're going through I use to do it myself. If you ever need someone to talk to even though we dont even know each other hey I'll be right here waiting on you okay? Thanks for the comment hun xx