Picture Perfect On My Wrist*Aly

Hey aly I really life this poem..i know the meaning of it and i like how it rhymes keep up the writing i am glad that my writing inspires you....love yah aly Mandz

Oh wow that poem is so powerful. please say this ins't about you though. bu thanks for the sweet comment:)

-chelseaa;

I agree with the change of words....but other than that ...awesome job

I agree with tamsin about the last line and changin the words around so that they rhyme, apart from that another fantastic poem!
I enjoy reading your poems, added you to my favourites aswell =D
5/5

Wow! i actually remember reading this a long time ago, i don't know y i didn't comment it! it's great, i could actually see it when i was reading it (not the best picture in my mind, but that's a good thing). 5/5!!

*Shawte*